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Sep 8, 2010 04:30
13 yrs ago
French term

Le roi de la notule

French to English Art/Literary Journalism
This is someone's expression of themselves when they worked as a journalist. He specialised in short pithy articles (jut a few lines) that encapsualted everything. He was a film critic. I have found this word tricky, as a journalist myself, I was trying to think what would be the best term, and the best is"short paragraph" as this is only ever what an editor would say to you to write, do you think there might be another way to say it and any suggestions?

Discussion

kashew Sep 8, 2010:
Nice to get a chance to be creative!

Proposed translations

5 hrs
Selected

King of concision

For its alliteration.

"I had considered myself the King of Concision. Then, I read Kevin Barber's The Century, which are exactly 100 words. This was on my mind when friend and ..."
womenspost.ca/blog/kevin-somers/why-fifty
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "This sounds the most English to me. Thanks"
19 mins

short note champion

A suggestion as requested.
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+1
46 mins

sultan of the short and sweet

Seems like this guy specialised in articles that were "short and sweet", hence my suggestion. I chose "sultan" because it's sort of in the same semantic area as "king" and starts with "s".

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Note added at 47 mins (2010-09-08 05:18:03 GMT)
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Maybe you could even go with "sheikh of the short and sweet", which has alliteration with "short" and assonance with "sweet".
Peer comment(s):

agree Bourth (X) : You should have been with Dire Straits!
2 hrs
Actually, their "Sultans of Swing" song was kind of at the back of my mind! Anyway, thanks Bourth.
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2 hrs

Short memo wizard

Notule: petite note, courte publication... That's widely in use within French administration.
Pour "le roi", je suggère "wizard": as, champion, magicien... Mais "champ" peut aller aussi !


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2 hrs

The king of the notelet

why not ?
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+4
3 hrs

ten-liner trafficker, five-liner pharoah

Or any other number, with or without alliteration.

AS IF what Iole thinks matters in the world of print Journalism. ... We get frackin' nascar coverage daily but a TEN-LINER for anything ...
sports.yahoo.com/.../Media-watch-Boston-treats-UFC-the-way-all-citie?...


However, there was one gentleman who wrote simultaneously for Hindu and Muslim newspapers. What he wrote in one paper, he rebutted in another. His name was Waqar Ambalvi. Dharm Vir used to say that he had never seen a poet who could wrote impromptu poetry at Ambalvi's speed.
As Ambalvi used to come to office, he would give a two-paisa bit to the peon in the stairs to fetch him some cigarettes. But before the peon could return, he would hand in his TEN-LINER, and on his way back the peon would give him the cigarettes, halfway down the staircase.
http://www.sajjanlahore.org/corners/zim/lastman/part4/hindup...

Hands up all those who admire a multi-page tortuous mathematical proof more than an elegant TEN LINER. Hands up all those who prefer a ...
patentlyo.com/patent/2008/11/obligation-to-p.html

Afghanistan have different reason than a TEN—LINER in a magazine." ... House at the journalist carelessness may be genuine. But it ...
www.cod.edu/people/faculty/yearman/.../Berlin_001635_18May2...

Video journalist Vaughan Smith, a former army captain, was embedded with the .... yet another notification, a ten-liner: "Oh not another ...
council.smallwarsjournal.com/showthread.php?p=94276

Amazing how a 500-word story can be cut down to a brief TEN-LINER because of lack of space given to the editor that day. ...
wc.arizona.edu/papers/91/144/17_4_m.html

A FIVE LINER that told us nothing at all about the movie! ..... But I guess, since the writer/director was a journalist, she focused on what ...
passionforcinema.com/peepli-live/

than British military historian-journalist-author Max Hastings. ... are flawless whether they be a small chapter or simple FIVE LINER. ...
articles.latimes.com/1986-03-30/books/bk-1484_1_max-hastings

Or work in his name. If he was Sylvain, he could be "seven-liner Sylvain". Or "five-liner Phil". "Eight-liner Olivia".
Peer comment(s):

agree Carol Gullidge : I like "ten/five-liner", but feel that any alliteration is probably unnecessary. Having said that, the 1st suggestion does have a nice ring to it!
24 mins
Just for the hellovit!
agree Alison Sabedoria (X)
27 mins
neutral SMcG (X) : nice, but a bit obscure, I had to read this to understand it.
1 hr
agree kashew : 5 goes with "a few lines" better than 10!
2 hrs
Depends how wide your column-inches are!
agree Sandra Mouton
1 day 3 hrs
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3 hrs

Ten-line(r) tsar

Just another idea.
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5 hrs

the footnote king

Might as well pitch in! footnote in the double sense of something that is of lesser importance (as in a footnote in history) and also a short annotation (notule).
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5 hrs

Master of the Mini-review

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Or, Prince of Pith!
Or, Queen of Quintessence!!
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7 hrs

King of Brevity

Literally, of course, this phrase means "king of the short note". In journalism, however, brevity is usually king, so I thought I'd offer this translation as a possibility.
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14 hrs

King/master of the nutshell

just for fun
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1 day 9 hrs

Captain Concise

Lots of nice ideas here.
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