May 28, 2008 01:44
16 yrs ago
Japanese term
設計当事者
Japanese to English
Tech/Engineering
Mechanics / Mech Engineering
以下のような文章です。
設計内容の妥当性や正確性を、設計当事者以外の設計者がチェックし・・・・
設計内容の妥当性や正確性を、設計当事者以外の設計者がチェックし・・・・
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 +4 | who did not design xxx |
Yuki Okada
|
| 4 +5 | designers (those working on the design) |
Tony Gonzalez
|
| 4 | people or person who desinged. |
Gowri Veeraraghavan
|
Proposed translations
+4
7 mins
Yuki Okada
Canada
Canada
Native in Japanese
Works in field
Canada
Engineering translator
Native in: Japanese 
Works in: English to Japanese, Japanese to English
Related KudoZ points
:
122
Selected
who did not design xxx
ご質問の言葉だけではありませんが、設計当事者以外の設計者がチェックし・ の部分、
A design engineer who did not design xxx checks ...
あたりでどうでしょうか。
A design engineer who did not design xxx checks ...
あたりでどうでしょうか。
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Krzysztof Łesyk
: Yes, another way to say it would be something like "designers not directly involved in the design" - the 以外 here is very important.
41 mins
|
| agree |
casey
3 hrs
|
| agree |
mstkwasa
: Pan Krzysztof is spot on here.
9 hrs
|
| agree |
Angel Yamada (X)
: someone except the designer/the one who designed
1 day 50 mins
|
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "ありがとうございました！"
+5
5 mins
Tony Gonzalez
Native in English
Works in field
Technical translator, >30 yrs experience
Native in: English (Variant: US)
Works in: Japanese to English
designers (those working on the design)
or, in context, "...designers other than those working on this design..."
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Magdalena Ciubancan (X)
9 mins
|
| agree |
Harvey Beasley
: That's the way I would do it.
36 mins
|
| agree |
michiko tsum (X)
2 hrs
|
| agree |
Ruth Sato
6 hrs
|
| agree |
AniseK
23 hrs
|
17 hrs
people or person who desinged.
設計当事者 is a desinger/s. In sentence though, its ’apart from designers' (設計当事者以外な者）。
Discussion
原文に忠実に訳すか、意訳するか、迷ったのですが、Yukiさんの簡潔な表現でいくことにしました。
Krzysztof さんが提案して頂いた、designers not directly involved in the design
という表現もわかりやすいと思いました。
みなさん、ありがとうございました！